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Um

Sprites are fine when done really really really well. This was kinda blah. The idea is kinda cute, try animated it with real drawings or not stick with a static screen, kinda boring. The sound was a little jarbled and hard to hear.

I have no idea whats going on.

Eh

Bad stop-motion animation, not sure what's going on in any of the movies. Try some real flash.

cool-penguin-0 responds:

Lovely.
<3

Ripoff

Krevency, of course they're good characters, someone else made them up. This isn't a parody, it's a ripoff. There is a difference. It was slow, it was boring, it was slightly humorous at parts but for the most part it was unoriginal. You have some good ideas, stick with them, but use your own characters.

Appeals only to potheads

Graphics were terrible, animation was shoddy at best and music videos are boring to watch.

FunkMobileX responds:

Glad you loved it.

Ehh

You need a new song and maybe some actual sounds of whats going on. Also put some shading on the characters, it'll make them look ALOT better.

Eh

Rule of thumb, don't EVER ask for people to vote for your movie.

Gotta tweak it

The start of it is WAY TOO SLOW. Get rid of the long introduction and just worry about the movie itself. You gotta keep people's attention and personally mine was lost half way through the opening credits.

It's cool how you put some detail on the sticks, maybe veer away from sticks?

Voodoo223 responds:

The introduction was first made to sync with a song, but then i removed the song and rplaced it with another.

You need to fix a few things.

This movie has a lot of potential, problem is there are glitches all over the place. YOu can see off the edge of the movie, there are blocks misssing in the middle of the screen and needless to say it runs like crap even on lowest quality.

You need to spell check too. It's the little things that make the difference between a top ten movie and one that barely breaks a 3.00. You might want to consider cutting out the long Star Wars style start of the movie.

I think it's good, just go back, tweak some things, pay more attention to things beside your 3D characters and you should be good to go.

Originality

It's best not to use something such as a song from Strong Bad and Homestarrunner.com for your own flash movies. It kinda detracts from the originality of it all, as well does the use of sprites...hey, haven't seen those done before. You're better off not bitmap tracing in flash, I guess that was an exposion at the end? It just seems like a bunch of random stuff where you sat down and asked yourself "I wonder what I can do if I mess around in flash.."

Eh

Why just redraw a scene from the movie? Seemed nearly traced ::cough:: Also you need to learn how to spell. "I think YOU'RE" ready...as in you are, not your as if he owns something. Try doing something original or take the matrix and do something original with it rather than something we've seen before.

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