You need to fix a few things.
This movie has a lot of potential, problem is there are glitches all over the place. YOu can see off the edge of the movie, there are blocks misssing in the middle of the screen and needless to say it runs like crap even on lowest quality.
You need to spell check too. It's the little things that make the difference between a top ten movie and one that barely breaks a 3.00. You might want to consider cutting out the long Star Wars style start of the movie.
I think it's good, just go back, tweak some things, pay more attention to things beside your 3D characters and you should be good to go.